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[Calgary's Episode 3]

The actual animation does not appear to be your biggest obstacle. I could pick things apart, but in essence I believe the audio is causing you the most trouble here. It sounds like you've got a combination of bad compression settings in flash and a microphone that doesn't do the recordings justice.

Otherwise, not a bad entry, from a technical standpoint.

The-Rat responds:

this was quite helpful, actually. I'm not just clicking the helpful button at random.

[Tostaneitor Mini]

Pretty slick!

This wasn't really bad at all, despite what some other people have been saying. I think the main reason for why they've rated this poorly is simply because the voice recordings were a little bit distracting. What I mean is that the voice doesn't come through very clearly, and it comes out too loud. If you played with the levels a little bit and maybe ran your voiceovers through a filter to remove some fuzz... You'd be getting much better ratings. From me, you get a solid 80%.

I liked this.
Power to you, Adollfo - and thanks for using my song! ;D

adollfo responds:

thanks =)...I'll follow your advise....and by the way your song is awesome